Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Refrain from Lamentations 3:55-57

I have called on Your name, O Lord
Out of the deepest pit
You heard my cry with listening ear
And said to me "Fear not"

The last line could be this:
And told me "Do not fear"

I would appreciate input if you have any.

2 comments:

  1. I think I like "And told me 'do not fear'" better. It seems to flow better.

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  2. "I called upon Your Name, O LORD."

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